literature

Words Fail Me

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If I could play the guitar,
I would, for you.
The deep echoes,
Thrumming, strumming,
Playing deep within me,
I wish I could let you hear,
So you'd know I love you.

If I could draw a picture,
I would, for you.
Soft and sweet,
The images of you and me,
The ones that lull me to sleep,
I wish I could let you see,
So you'd know I love you.

If I could give a hug,
I would, for you.
Just like yours,
Strong and comforting,
Letting me believe that all is good,
I wish I could let you feel,
So you'd know how much I love you.
For you, as always.
~~~
Hey lovely folks who watch me : ) I'm not actually back from my hiatus, but I found 5 minutes to post this. I hope somebody enjoys it.
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Not sure what to think of this. Not my favorite, but I don't hate it. Any feedback would be fantastic. xoxo
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Katie-the-Great07's avatar
ZUKI!! :D Good to have you sort of back. Will you be doing Zutara week?

And now for the poem~
It has a nice rhythm and is quite intriguing. You always have a way of getting your emotions across through the written word, even if it can be interpreted in many a way. As they say, beauty is in the eye of the beholder, and I think this is a great poem. Well done! :D